Toward a New Consciousness

From reading the 'Toward a New Consciousness', I was able realize it talks about discrimination and racism in our world. The article, itself relates to different cultures such as Mexicans and Indians. Moreover the article discuss about the humiliation that Indians or other peoples had to suffer from Whites. Based on the reading, it seems that the whites are portrayed as a superior and powerful, however, other people than Whites seems to depicted as weaker than them. Since this article seems to look back to her experiences and emotional feelings, this article is definitely relate to reflection. Besides, this reading strongly reflect to different cultures experiences and feelings. Consequently, these are the reasons that this article is assigned for our reading assignment.

Looking back at the blogs that I have written, I was able to realize that some sentences was not well organized or run out. Due to time consumption, it seems that I was not able to have time to reorganize and edit the paragraphs or delete the repeated sentences. Now from looking back at the previous writings, I am able to realize that I need to try to proof read and make sure if the sentences or paragraphs are well organized.

Overall the reading, Toward a New Consciousness is a well written paper which reflect to the author's experiences and other peoples' experiences. Besides it seems that my previous writings needs some proof read for better sentence structure and organization.